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Before I start, I want to clarify some background. The first thing that occurred to me when I read the topic of the essay was this one. How am I supposed to imagine that? After a while, I came up with the idea that I could form my city's personality by asking myself how I have changed since I moved to here in September 2020. Let's think of my personal changes as if it were inspired by the place where I live.
I remember being self-conscious about my abilities, ashamed of appearance when I met my university groupmates for the first time. I thought I wasn't attractive and smart enough compared to the others. It's way better now. So if my city was a person, it would be that one who easily draws others out and you feel really comfortable to be with. It also would be someone who is emotionally mature to be responsible for his or her actions and their consequences. I had always been terrified of being involved in any extracurricular activities or something that implies social interactions before. Once my friend got so fed up with it that said I can't avoid people all my life just because communication takes a lot out of me. Her words really struck a chord with me, and I decided that was a high time for me to get my social awkwardness off. I started putting myself out there and notice that it's kind of counter-intuitive. You let yourself feel embarrassed on purpose and, contrary to what one might expect, you become more self-reliant. So, even if it might bruise your ego, that person would be outspoken and a little bit opinionated. He or she would always mean well, although in a rude and intrusive manner sometimes. And the last trait I want my city would have is tolerance. Just like every sprawling city has flourishing areas and desolate ones, every person has advantages and disadvantages. We are a far cry from being perfect and that is exactly what makes us alive.
P. S. I have trшed to stick to American English recently. Thanks a lot for your corrections!
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Dil bilgisi: Anadili, Yeterlilik
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